Fish Out The Grammatical Errors In This Piece

A colleague of mine, Mr Godswill Amadi, shared this seeming piece with me and I tried my best to fish out some  of the hidden grammatical errors. Can you do same? 

Read the piece below:

The first doctor,Mr Akin did a more better prognosis than the second,Mr Obin.However,a medical advice from the health organisation(H.O) cancelled further medical session involving the patient;the prognosis notwithstanding.The H.O broke a news,a hearth-warming news,of an european hospital which has offered to grant the patient a free medical treatment.The government,according to reports,has received the offer with great joy and in their generousity decided to foot the bill of her travel.



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